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| Quite a few people ask of my powers and so I decided to use this thing to show them and not have to tell them over and over again. I will make changes or add ons every now and again. Dkilla: ht:6'1 wt:165 age:18 Redish/brown hair, yellow eyes Powers: Control over lightning,(uses different colored lightning for different expansion effects. Green lightning is breast or butt expansion, Blue lightning is sensitivity increase or a series orgasms to the target depending how strong the lightning is, red is TG lightning, transforms guys into girls, and orange GTS lightning.) Also has teleportation powers(only short distances) Can also summon a red iron staff at any time he wishes and it increases the power of his lightning, only he can wield it, and anyone else who tries to use it gets electrocuted. Even Dibella. He can also use jutsus but not very often due to his low chakra count. Weakness: Using his red transformation lightning causes the depleation of his powers shortly afterwards. His overconfidence makes him underestimate his opponets often. Likes: Expanding girls but mostly Sponny, fighting strong opponets, and laughing at Babermirza when he blows up the world. He also likes borrowing Babermirza's inventions most of the time without permission just so he can see what they do. Hates: Transforming into Dibella right when he is about to expand a girl, guys who grab him by the collar and shake him because he expanded their girlfriends, and anyone who underestimates him. Fears: The idea of having sex as Dibella, Sponny when she is mad, and Tsunade. Misc: Dkilla can be random at times when his feelings are hurt and starts doing things that little kids would do. He is good friends with Jiraiya because before Dkilla joined the Expansion Writers Jiraiya was Dkilla's first customer when he did free lance expanding. Likes the color red. His parents lived 40 years ago back when the ED wars first started against a group called the expansion masters, even back then Algeron hated expanders but for a different reason. Dkilla's mom died sending him forward in time while he was an infant to prevent Algeron from killing him. Dkilla's mom looks a lot like Dibella only with bigger boobs, it is also said that she had the unexpandable gene. Not much is known about Dkilla's dad except that he somehow got rid of the gene and expanded his mom as a proposal, and that he wears a white mask and cloak that covers his face sorta like Babermirza's cloak. Somehow he disappeared right after Dkilla's mom sent Dkilla in time. Dkilla's dad was the leader of the expansion masters. Wyatt and Peter were members of this group as well and before they left Dkilla's dad gave Wyatt a mysterious box that can only be opened by the person who needs to open it. Dibella: Ht:5'5 wt:110 age:18 Cup Size: CC cup Long Red Hair, yellow eyes Powers: able to make clones of herself by using some weird energy she gets after transforming from Dkilla, it's simular to chakra but doesn't require hand signs to use. Also can manipulate the energy into weapons to fight with or other items. Weakness: Making more that three clones of herself causes her to have really powerful orgasms for some unknown reason. Loss of Expansion powers. Likes: Being expanded but no bigger than G cup, hanging out with Sponny, shopping, Inuyasha for some odd reason, and the color pink. Hates: The fact that Babermirza fails to realize she is the girl form of Dkilla, Her aunt Illusha, and not having expansion powers. Fears: Her friends getting injured on her behalf, all kinds of bugs, and the idea of being unable to change back to being Dkilla. Misc: Dibella is very friendly and usually greets everyone she knows with a hug instead of just saying hi. She also lacks the ability of being shy and will often strip in public places or walk around naked since she doesn't know a reason not to. When attempting to expand girls Dibella tends to get extremely nervous and most of the time messes up causing undesired outcomes ranging from making the girl too big to accidently expanding herself. |
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Run for the hills Aisha Clanclan is going to kill me for calling her a pretty Kitty!!!
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"It is dangerous to be right when the government is wrong." - Voltaire
= Also known as ~Ultimatebiju
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Sponny's personal expander, just kidding
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"It is dangerous to be right when the government is wrong." - Voltaire
= Also known as ~Ultimatebiju
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Run for the hills Aisha Clanclan is going to kill me for calling her a pretty Kitty!!!
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There is no emotion, there is only passion,
Through passion i gain strength,
Through strength i gain power
Through power i gain victory,
Through victory my chains are broken,
The force shall free me. {SITH CODE}
I know at first it seems like a good idea to make a character so strong that he can't be defeated in battle by anyone but really all that does is make a story boring because it will always have the same outcome. But enough negative stuff, you have improved in your writing like I started off you have gotten better at making your stories longer and you have some ok ideas but work on adding expansion its still your goal to get into EW right? EW is a club of perverts who write about perverted stuff like growing breasts and whatnot if your stories don't contain perverted stuff then you don't belong in the club. Just like if a vegetarian goes to a BBQ party what does he expect to eat if he doesn't eat meat? Don't get angry at me for saying any of this I'm just trying to help you out the best I can.
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Sponny's personal expander, just kidding
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There is no emotion, there is only passion,
Through passion i gain strength,
Through strength i gain power
Through power i gain victory,
Through victory my chains are broken,
The force shall free me. {SITH CODE}
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Sponny's personal expander, just kidding
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There is no emotion, there is only passion,
Through passion i gain strength,
Through strength i gain power
Through power i gain victory,
Through victory my chains are broken,
The force shall free me. {SITH CODE}
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